It is undoubtly the case that nowadays, families are not residing under a same roof; it is affecting the mankind adversely. Through this essay, I will go to discuss the root cause of this problem and methods to mitigate this critical situation.
While, there are Cascade of reasons for this unfortunate trend. A few of them are more prominent. The first and foremost is lack of moral values. Nowadays, nodoubt, youngestors are well educated, but they forgot the moral values for instance, sympathy, cooperation. According to my prospective, it is may be due to the reason that children lived in hostel to get education. Therefore, they lived far away from their grandparents and parents for many years. Thus, not able to learnt moral values. According to my point of view this problem can be solve by creating awareness among the youth about the importance of family in life, because family is part and parcel for everyone. Grandparents especially saw dark and light side of moon in their life.
Secondly, earning more money is the another factor that makes gap between families. The best epitome of this is in the present scenerio, almost ninety percent people residing in overseas because of high availability of job opportunities in foreign countries. Hence, this is also the main cause of separation of families. To overcome this problem, the best method is to spend vacations with families residing in other places that helps to make bridge between two families and develop sense of belonginess.
Last but not the least the most important factor is self dependence of youth. In modern era, everyone prefer to live in nuclear family. This is due to the reason that young-generation not allow their parents or grandparents to interfere in their lives it may be due to generation gap. To tackle this problem it is necessary to council the youth about the importance of elders in life.
To crown it all, I pen down saying that there are variety of different factors that have led to make this problem worst. However, I tend to believe that there is no complete solution for this problem, it can be probably solve by providing awareness to youth about how parents and grandparents plays crucial role in our life as well as motivate them to spend more time with their elders to overcome the problem of separation from their family members.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'cascades'?
Suggestion: Cascades
...critical situation. While, there are Cascade of reasons for this unfortunate trend. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1962.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94206549118 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67718966538 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523929471033 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8834606369 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4285714286 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9047619048 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176865898914 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459560504341 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461029750675 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100283949379 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228124741242 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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