Today as we are moving forward in our life, we see families are moving away from each other.The reasons for this change are may be due to people want to stay reserved or due to jealousy as well as they want to stay less in contact.This problem can be solved by having communication, resolving issues, helping each other.
While, we see many of our family members are busy moving to abroad. For instance, more than 50 percent of Indian population are moving abroad.Certainly, they do not find time to call their parents and ask about their health. They want to stay reserved with all their problems solving by themselves. Some of them find jealous of others and do not share information to them.
In olden days we find people going to their parents home to enjoy by sharing information, get to know each other.so, there was high communication, use to find solutions to their problems, exchanging ideas, go with any financial help required.
In summary, connecting with family gives happiness by knowing about our culture more deeply.
- Today’s children are living under more pressure from the society than children in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 89
- The earth is being filled with waste material such as plastic bags and other rubbish. Is this really happening? What are some solutions to this problem?Gives reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.W 56
- The only way to improve safety on our roads is to give much stricter punishments for driving offenses.What extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people prefer to live in hot climates, where as other love the lifestyle in countries with cold climate. Discuss both views and explain which climate you prefer. 73
- Some people believe that people who do physical work should be paid on par with the people who have high level degrees Do you agree or disagree 69
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
...amilies are moving away from each other.The reasons for this change are may be due ...
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...ll as they want to stay less in contact.This problem can be solved by having communi...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...esolving issues, helping each other. While, we see many of our family members are ...
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Suggestion: Certainly
... of Indian population are moving abroad.Certainly, they do not find time to call their pa...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...other.so, there was high communication, use to find solutions to their problems, ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, while, for instance, in summary, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 177.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88700564972 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73108770499 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.1232537286 49.4020404114 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.571428571 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119362231959 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504442895634 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391248897765 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694013892903 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423145938365 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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