In some cases, rearing children is getting difficult, cause the parent's busy life, scarce of knowledge, not giving importance to children. As a matter of fact, taking parenting courses is becoming popular these days, educated parents investing time and spending a lot of money tend to learn about parenting techniques. But this is not affordable to someone who is actually running behind money. I partially agree that taking parental courses will be helpful for people who want to maintain a positive relationship with their children.
To begin with, positively, the main purpose of the institution is to provide different aspects of how parenting skills would impact their children's growth. For instance, if a family has one child and both mother and father is an entrepreneur, then obviously taking care of belongings would not be efficient comparatively with a family who is living with grandparents. As a consequence, some children are not getting family support which is leading them to do crimes. Hence, these courses teach how parents should handle children in a courteous manner and even sometimes parenting skills will be advising parents if they intend to get a divorce.
On the other hand, there are many aspects that parenting skills would be useful because it would make, more comfortable relationship with children. Moreover, you can learn, at each stage what to do with the child's life, how to behave with the discipline to the elder people if they meet and even though parents not even in a relationship they can learn how to raise children together.
To conclude, I believe attending parenting courses would help parents presumably on what actions to be taken on children's as well as it would also assist parents in making a good way for them to sustain in the competitive world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 530, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a courteous manner" with adverb for "courteous"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...each how parents should handle children in a courteous manner and even sometimes parenting skills wil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, well, even so, for instance, as a matter of fact, as well as, in some cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06060606061 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76066353191 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558922558923 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.4213599476 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.636363636 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6363636364 7.06120827912 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340397131531 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13822008308 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847809758769 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225874718005 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610074666159 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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