It is undeniably true that of late crime rate in adolescents have been mushroomed significantly because of many reasons. Many believe that the uncensored content telecasting in either media or news encourage juvenile to breach the law. Although I agree that news does play a vital role in children's minds to commit crimes, I think it is not the sole reason.
To embark upon, media giants not only telecast more and more violent news but also exaggerate to gain more attention from views and subsequently to gain TRP ratings. The debate programmers in news channels explain each and every detail on how to commit misdeeds. In addition to this, due to the technological advancements internet has been made available to the millennials and the government has been failing to set regulations neither on online media nor on social media. As a result, the convicts' rate in juveniles has been increasing. For instance, rape cases and cybercrimes are the major inspired crimes for minors.
On the other hand, kids who are raised in disputed family relations do commit more unlawful activities. Furthermore, both poverty and lack of basic education are forcing minors as lawbreakers. A recent survey conducted by one of the renowned agencies reported that in slum areas misdeeds have been increasing increased without being exposed to the media. On top of this, having a felon friend is also the reason.
To conclude, different media mediums such as TV news coverage, online media, and reality shows do have adverse effects on children's mindsets. Nonetheless, there are other reasons as well namely family relations, poverty, and illiteracy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 300, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'minds committing'.
Suggestion: minds committing
...ews does play a vital role in childrens minds to commit crimes, I think it is not the sole reas...
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Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'advancements'' or 'advancement's'?
Suggestion: advancements'; advancement's
...ition to this, due to the technological advancements internet has been made available to the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, nonetheless, so, well, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18045112782 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80818763654 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639097744361 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6249646782 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4285714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162172413613 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527579403887 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349184338621 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919664039901 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181579641582 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.