Labour-saving devices such as dishwasher and communication tools computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult.
Does modern technology reduce or increase stress?
Modern technology drives whole world. Innovative tools have significant affect on our daily-life. therefore, some people are of the opinion that advance devices make life more effort-less. While other group of people think that by use of such advancements , life become more miserable. Before giving conclusion, I would prefer to discuss both views further.
Present era demands to use advance technology to make life more easier and comfortable. Some people having thought that effort-less devices bring relieve and ease to enjoy special moment of life. I would like to give an example of home appliances which, may create house-wife's life burden-less. By using these devices they could finish their long-hours work into a few minutes and, they might give full attention to their children. This, advance technology does not create fatigue or tension in people's life and have opportunity to enjoy their happy moments.
On the other hand, there is an other school of thought that these advancements become our life dependent. Consequently, normal life turns into handicap. They also believe, less physical work leads life into numerous psychological diseases i.e. depression and anxiety. For illustration, people who do not prefer to perform manual work may need to see doctor on frequent basis. Resultantly, doctor may advise them some physical exercise. Hence physical work is a natural phenomena to deal boredom and stress.
The aforementioned discussion leads me to cast vote for physical work and use less modern devices. So, adopting good practices keep person's life busy and would have less spare-time for negative thinking. Being a house-wife, I preferred to use less advance household-tools to make me healthy and fit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
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...By using these devices they could finish their long-hours work into a few minutes...
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...not create fatigue or tension in peoples life and have opportunity to enjoy their...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...may advise them some physical exercise. Hence physical work is a natural phenomena to...
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...rcise. Hence physical work is a natural phenomena to deal boredom and stress. The afor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, if, may, so, therefore, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40959409594 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82379747502 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616236162362 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0301338267 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.1578947368 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2631578947 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94736842105 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171159806072 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588546601598 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563967345695 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112185472775 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057901268325 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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