Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult.
Does modern technology reduce or increase stress?
We live in a clumsy Artificial intelligence world. Business cost cutting is approached through robotic device like utensils cleaner, and laptop or desktop tool, are expected to ease our lives. Nonetheless, one part of a group debate the these devices complicates them. I believe it would be lack of knowledge to operate instead of an actual argument. In this essay we will discuss latest technology relieves or burden stress.
Indeed latest technology has not only given us an enormous benefits but also reduced our stress. In the not so distant past, bank teller had a tedious job of counting deposit money by individual banking customer at a bank branch. After the invention of teller machine, cashier is able to count even lump sum of money within few minutes. Additionally, through the invention of ATM (Any Time Money) a customer is could deposit or withdraw money at favourable time. For instance, sender could deposit some money from one part of the world and receiver could easily withdraw within few hours. Consequently, invention of this in-build computer device has drastically saved time than the past traditional banking.
On the contrary, growing technology has also pressurised us during technical failure. Let us use a Citi bank cashless card as an example, during peak festival season, precisely, “Thanks Giving Day” shopping, when a bank faces a technical glitch, Citi bank customer is assert to end giving up shopping.
In a summary, I partially agree to a group of people argument that the latest technology burden us. However, it has also relaxed us from major difficulties. Therefore, saved valuable time. There are pros and cons in every invention of device but, as a whole, it is good to see how it has benefited us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'discuss the latest'.
Suggestion: discuss the latest
... actual argument. In this essay we will discuss latest technology relieves or burden stress. ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Indeed the latest'.
Suggestion: Indeed the latest
...echnology relieves or burden stress. Indeed latest technology has not only given us an eno...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...echnology relieves or burden stress. Indeed latest technology has not only given us...
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Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'benefit'?
Suggestion: benefit
...ology has not only given us an enormous benefits but also reduced our stress. In the not...
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Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...ention of ATM Any Time Money a customer is could deposit or withdraw money at favo...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'asserted'.
Suggestion: asserted
...technical glitch, Citi bank customer is assert to end giving up shopping. In a summ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06920415225 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74137554978 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622837370242 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7230944322 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1764705882 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127015609747 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435693802101 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440020698806 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740041632805 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453912365718 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.