labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools
such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier.
However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult.
Does modern technology reduce or increase stress?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Even though the modern breakthroughs of high tech world has made the life convenient, a minority vocalizes that modern devices has turned the life quite difficult. However, I cogitate that advancement in technology has really trimmed down the undue stress because it endows huge leisure time and remove the fatigue.
Since the dawn of techno savvy epoch the life of man has blessed with utmost convenience, thus human are taking the advantage of these modern devices and making their life easy. Seemingly, modern technology performs tasks at robotic speed along with high accuracy and efficiency which eventually save the colossal amount of times of humans.
Consequently, the leisure time could be utilized to enjoy the precious moments of life and get rid of depression and anxiety.Also it is biased to overlook the fact published by American Mental Health Council that work related anxiety in every sector has been significantly combated owing to the marvelous speed of computers. Therefore, the technology reduced the complexity and amplification of work and endows the sufficient time to relax .
On the top of the that, the labor intensive device has trimmed down the effort of human kind, due to fully automation the physical work has been reduced up to a great extent. Hence, marginalizing the physical efforts would deteriorate the fatigue which leads to hyper tension and stress. To exemplify, as per the report published by the New York Times, in the gone calendar year, the level of tiredness among housewives has diminished due to the modern kitchen appliances. Henceforth, automation in the work decrease the work related boredom by limiting the physical movements.
In conclusion, although extreme automation paves the path of monotony, it has guaranteed the adequate time to relax and get rid of burnouts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, however, if, look, really, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27739726027 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80036157501 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9925324962 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.090909091 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359384446947 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121420792017 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.184549839672 0.0667982634062 276% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200625204533 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.263892720381 0.056905535591 464% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.