Leaving Country & Living Abroad
With the immense growth in population and unmanaged governance in our country, living a peaceful & balance life has become a really big problem for everyone. Leaving our country and living abroad has many advantages & disadvantages, so making a decision to leave a country vary from person to person and what are their priorities in life. Mostly people leave their country just to provide a good lifestyle to their family.
If we think about the advantages of leaving our country is that we can have basic necessities of life easily. This is very difficult in third world countries like ours. This is not just one main point of anyone leaving a country, there are many other factors which makes a person to leave their country, the most important one is lack of security. In our country, security is a measure concern. Law and order is not well maintained. Where as in developed countries, they guarantee the basic rights and there is a proper implementation of law and order. A decision maker of the family which is normally the head of the family always wants to have their kids and wife safe even if they are with or without him/her.
As there are many advantages of living abroad, there are some disadvantages as well, which most of the people don’t realize before leaving. One of them is the loneliness they feel after leaving their country. The person habitual of living with their relatives and friends are going to miss their moments a lot, when he is staying alone abroad with their kids and wife. Initially he may not feel it, but later with the passage of time these things start disturbing the mind. And the other difficult situation a person feels when he is living abroad is that the joy of occasions or festival, these maybe religious or cultural. Which he/she may not find it easily in other countries.
So in my opinion if a person’s priority is to provide luxuries and security to his/her family and doesn’t care about the cultural festivals or religious difference a lot. Then he should go on for living abroad else, he should make a wise decision by organizing his/her priorities.
- In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Leaving Country & Living Abroad 67
- Leaving Country & Living Abroad 61
- Parents should not pressure their children 67
- Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere.To what extent do you agree with this view? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e a good lifestyle to their family. If we think about the advantages of leavin...
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...leaving our country is that we can have basic necessities of life easily. This is very difficult ...
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Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
.... Law and order is not well maintained. Where as in developed countries, they guarantee ...
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...val, these maybe religious or cultural. Which he/she may not find it easily in other ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, so, then, third, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83287671233 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62321271384 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509589041096 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8552666194 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2777777778 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267072008665 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800765712164 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895979744988 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170126815863 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953225295746 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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