Maintaining public libraries is a waste of time since digital technology is now replacing their function. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
libraries, whether public or private, are extremely necessary and irreplaceable. digital and other types of technology are to add value and figure to the facilities which explore literature and studies. it is fully disagreeable any thought of not investing on the maintenance of such institutions.
A foolish mistake would be made if libraries were extinct or surpassed by digital books. these kinds of places are historic in their essence and even preserve cultural heritage. All the architecture and furniture are worth of being maintained, moreover centenial books and documents are priceless itens that tell present and future generations where they come from.
digital media display a pivotal role in the modern cultural scenario, however the new is not supposed to abolish the antique. it is merituous to categorize and save all data and photograph of one society's patrimonial riches. Furthermore, technological resources ought to be part of what is offered to the public by those places.
To support cultural public institutions is to keep society alive and sound. one generation must instruct the following one through what is palpable, concrete and physical. Gazing a historic book, reading through its pages, touching (when possible) its paper is an experience to be cherished forever. Instead of being a waste of time and money, it is a crucial investment and assured gain.
To conclude and to the complete extent of the issue, digital technology will not substitute libraries. Thus, their maintenance and funding is absolutely not a waste of effort nor of time. these public facilities are essential to maintain a society and its culture alive, therefore being completely worthy of being maintained.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38518518519 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95560196752 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618518518519 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2875314933 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4375 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194928225041 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585445439278 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431405595611 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101451663301 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457247034384 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.