The manufacturing and use of cars damage the environment but their popularity is increasing. Why is this happening? How could this be controlled?
In today’s world vehicles have become an integral part of people life. Not only production of cars but also its usage can lead to detrimental impact on environment. Nevertheless, their popularity seems to be rising with time. although the car manufacturing industry is gaining popularity, its hazardous effect on nature and human beings cannot be ignored. In this essay we will discuss about the reasons behind the popularity of the cars and the measures that can be taken to control it.
transportation industry has been developing on a very large scale and is becoming a very competitive business market. Infrastructure setup for the industry requires large land fields. The manufacturing unit generates huge waste and its disposal results in pollution. For example, if the waste is dumped without proper treatment it will cause land pollution while the gasses coming out of the industry are majorly responsible for air pollution. people living near will become ill due to the pollution resulting from these industries which indirectly results in population immigration.
Despite all the above-mentioned reasons, the cars are popular. The main reason behind their popularity is their efficiency and affordability. these industry lure customers as they have something for everyone. To Illustrate, price range of the cars vary depending on the features. while ease of use is quite appealing, most of the people buy it as a status symbol. although the cars have made transportation from one place to another easy and friendly, but the resulting pollution is cause of concern.
In order to minimize the pollution, we can try to achieve balance between the demand and supply. Switching to a fuel which cause no to minimal pollution can be considered as an effective way to decrease the pollution levels. Government can implement new policies like odd-even rule followed with regular pollution check of vehicles. effective measures can be taken to regulate the environmental damage resulting from the car industry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37617554859 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99901222917 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4078015786 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.75 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.95 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177927814233 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537653722651 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631935858677 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108101364779 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831347343628 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.