In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Smoking has being a tradition over generation of time but nowadays, most countries forbid by law smoking in public arenas. Those with the ego to smoke have the obligation to satisfy their desire in isolation rather than socially. In my opinion, I strongly agree that people should step out when they want to smoke so as to protect their health, those of non smokers and the environment.
Advancement in medical research has shown us that smoking generates tremendous profound and detrimental effects to the health of both primary and secondary smokers. In order words, anyone who inhales tobacco smoke is prone to health issues including cancer, hypertension, and other heart related diseases. In addition, research has shown that secondary smokers have higher risk of heart failure than the main smoker. It would be unfair for someone with breathing problems to inhale toxic air from tobacco. For these reasons, it is been polite for smokers to stay away from non smokers when they desire to smoke.
Smoking is not only dangerous to people but to the environment as a whole. That is to say carbon dioxide release during smoking is a green house gas which directly impacts our climate. A lot of scientific researches have shown that the primary cause of global warming is carbon dioxide released from industries and burning tobacco. Furthermore, smoking can result to disaster some cases. For instance, gas leak in an enclosed environment can lead to explosion if someone lit a cigarette.
In conclusion, states that are environmentally conscious are pragmatically banning smoking on public gathering. It is absolutely correct for people with the desire to smoke to step out and enjoy themselves without affecting the health of others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 315, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...should step out when they want to smoke so as to protect their health, those of non smok...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, so, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17314487633 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72708660222 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600706713781 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.938709178 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.6 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216466999763 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761612791926 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394122664132 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133953832903 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214969463342 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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