In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent.
Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
Number of crimes is increasing in a big number all over the world. Many countries react to this problem by building large and big prisons, to hold the criminals. This way did not reach to any solution, it became worse and each year big number of prisons need to be built. That is why we need to go back to the basics of this problem and try to assess the main causes.
Many reasons are causing an increase in violence, especially in undeveloped countries. First, computer games and television movies may be a reason for making crimes more violent. However, the main cause of violent is poverty, where the rich people will use their power on the poor society, this will cause a big gap in between. Addition to that, people are addicted more to drug and this led them to do unexpected things, like stealing, killing or sexual harassment. For example, undeveloped country leaders, they impose their energy on poor people and oblige to live in poverty and this way encourage them to take what they do not have.
On the other hand, finding the suitable solution is not easy. First, government should ensure that more jobs are created with good benefits and health coverage, where the gap between rich and poor will reduce. Moreover, prisons must be a place to rehabilitate the criminals and teach them how correctly life must be lived and be ready to enter workforce. Furthermore, a war against drugs must be successful, since this poison is ending a big number of teenagers by making them criminals. For example, in poor cities, number of drug dealers and addicted people are increasing randomly, where state’s neglect them and do not secure their needs and rights.
As a conclusion, crime can continue increasing in crowded places, if there is not any solution for the causes. I think that through organizations and education we can fight and stop violence and make sure all people are equal in rights and working.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78614457831 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51096268188 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55421686747 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0075157161 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3125 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259058721809 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791708180249 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444204175942 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150140555539 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397258311966 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.