Over the past few years, there has been a significant growth of the income which lead a great rise in the amount of money being spent by people. I personally believe that it obviously has a positive impact on various aspects.
To begin with, these increasing spending cultures are most likely to contribute broaden economical aspect. It is no doubt that we need sufficient money to fulfil our basic needs:food, shelter and healthcare services. As the majority of them are wealthy enough in these days, those who receive excellent pay packages, compared to the past, are potentially important customers among manufacturing companies, and their frequent spending behaviors on such company's products will directly result in the profit which can be invested to the development of the new products. In this spending and production systems, not only the host company will be beneficial, but also any other companies related to the new product, such as manufacturing factory or design, advertising firms will have the opportunities to prosper in the future, that will promote economic development and accelerate GDP growth.
However, I believe that this sense of the economic success of the well-spending culture is applicable to another field. People spend their money on buying more items, such as having dinner with friends, participating in sports or watching a live performance, this trend would result in job creation and a high level of employment, which can be seen as a positive impact from the perspective of the country. Furthermore, such a strong economy and employment of the nation can help a country's standing on the global stages in terms of its political influence and trading power.
In conclusion, it is obvious to me that the increased spending behaviors can have the remarkably positive consequences in the various aspect of the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , shelter
...ent money to fulfil our basic needs:food,shelter,and healthcare services. As we earn mor...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , such
...tra money can be spent on buy more items,such as having dinner with friends, particip...
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Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , buying
...in sports or watching a live performance,buying more items we like, which can relieve o...
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Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Credit
...less things such as: Alcohol or drinking,Credit card interest,Cigarettes,Lottery or gam...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Cigarettes
...Alcohol or drinking,Credit card interest,Cigarettes,Lottery or gambling, which are throwing...
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Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , spending
...k hard for your money but, unfortunately,spending money on those worthless items can make...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10222222222 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4295851529 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684444444444 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8870953605 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.8 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224790917207 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823948706526 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603156985006 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122730745527 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579937241236 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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