In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
People have different views about whether high-paid wages are positive for a nation or there should be a limit on it. However, I believe that salaries should be capped for the development of the community.
At the outset, there are various reasons why employers should provide maximum wages. Firstly, employees is likely to highly motivated if maximum remuneration is earned by them. It is because a good package might be the only motivation, for which they have opted for those jobs. The twofold benefits of this approach are that not only highly paid employees carry out their best to meet the goals, but also it encourages rest workforce to work efficiently. Secondly, the government could levy huge taxes on these highly paid workers. This money, further, could be used for infrastructure development, such as education, medical and security. For instance, in the recent budget, huge funds were granted by the state government from the money generated from high taxpayers.
On the other hand, other people and I also think that there should be a cap on the maximum salary. Because a sense of discrimination is experienced by the maximum employees, earning lower salaries. This discrimination may lead them to the mindset that the system is unfair. Hence, for economic equality, it is imperative to limit the extreme salaries. So that everyone can earn a decent wage regardless of his job profile. Moreover, if their salaries are paid equally, the standard of living can be raised. As the money that is earned by some people can be used to raise the standard of the other workers. Capped salaries in the first world countries are a good example that how the living standard of the entire nation could be improved. Further, this approach reduces poverty and crime rates by allowing earning a sound wage, especially, to them, who are underprivileged. Thus, is beneficial for the overall growth of a country.
In conclusion, although both unlimited wages and a cap on salary have their own merits, from my viewpoint, for complete, development salaries must be capped.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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..., the standard of living can be raised. As the money that is earned by some people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07288629738 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77895944138 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7117401039 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.15 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264542883818 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774306612298 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445851170573 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156317407078 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554491168865 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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