Nowadays, an increasing interest is shown in terms of crime-related books, TV shows and cinemas all around the world. I believe the main reason behind the popularity of this genre is the endless curiosity they bring throughout the story. In my point of view, this category of fictions can create a negative impact as well as a positive impact on society hence both areas will be discussed.
It is beyond doubt, "Sherlock Holmes" was the most popular crime novel series ever thus not only these days but also throughout history, crime-related entertainments have become very popular among all ages. People are always curious or interested in getting to know, Therefore curiosity is considered as the main reason behind the ultimate success of crime fictions. On the other hand, the entertainer does not make any sense of tedious than other categories such as love stories or horror. In addition, technology also has made a significant contribution to this popularity. For instance, Netflix and Youtube are new sources of entertainment and many newly released crime TV shows and cinemas are available on Netflix.
It is frequently argued that crime-related entertainments create a negative impact on society. Up to a certain extent, this argument is considered true, in the reason why the majority of the audience of crime fictions and TV shows is younger generation means their curiosity and activeness make them engage in crimes for some reasons such as fun or financial gain and they might plan crimes as shown in the cinema. On the other hand, as another side of the coin, crime entertainments can also create a positive impact on society through awareness where people can educate how to avoid crime situations. For example, someone can get an idea of how a criminal can enter their house therefore remedial actions can be taken to fix the vulnerability before it actually taking place. From that point of view, crime-related entertainments are a good source of awareness.
In conclusion, it is accepted those crime fictions and TV shows are popular and while they case a negative impact on society, they also can create a positive impact through awareness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12359550562 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91986781846 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536516853933 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.9457663055 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.285714286 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3571428571 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290831379451 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10319908549 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807034524551 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192186094199 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404387026522 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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