Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

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...he has no choice but to become an outlaw . Thus,crime is increasing in the prodigi...
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...no choice but to become an outlaw . Thus,crime is increasing in the prodigious society...
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... is increasing in the prodigious society .There must be some reasons behind this s...
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...s increasing in the prodigious society .There must be some reasons behind this surgin...
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...me reasons behind this surging of crimes .However,it is pondered that offenders co...
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...rimes after serving the first punishment .Below light will be shed upon its reason...
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...mes after serving the first punishment .Below light will be shed upon its reasons and...
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...its reasons and solution for the problem . First of all,the main reason can be ...
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...lution for the problem . First of all,the main reason can be the 'Need for m...
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...n can be the 'Need for money'.After getting the first punishment ,offenders...
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...apos;.After getting the first punishment ,offenders becomes against the authoritie...
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...they have to face their harsh behaviour.Thus mental problems can be uplifted and in ...
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...they have to face their harsh behaviour.Thus mental problems can be uplifted and in ...
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...o overcome this they stared taking drugs,alcohol etc, because of which they need more mo...
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...wing themselves into the world of crimes .And the another reason is the 'Bad ...
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...ng themselves into the world of crimes .And the another reason is the 'Bad com...
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...he 'Bad company'. In the jails , offenders can meet more dangerous crimi...
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...es after releasing from jail. Further,knowing solutions of the above goven problem is...
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...n problem is even holding more priority.Firstly,there is exigency in the changing of cr...
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...em is even holding more priority.Firstly,there is exigency in the changing of crime re...
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...ng of crime related legislation or laws.And the second soultion is 'Probation&...
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...econd soultion is 'Probation'.Probation is a good way to reduce prison overcrow...
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...a good way to reduce prison overcrowding ,but it must only used for those who have...
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...for those who have commited minor crimes .The last and most important solution &ap...
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...rtant solution 'Rehabilation'.It is important to rehabilate criminals wh...
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...important to rehabilate criminals while their are in prison otherwise they may re-off...
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...fend when they release. In a nutshell,there is a need to treat the criminals in a w...
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... equal vistas as the normal people have.Through this way, one can eradicate the prodigi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, thus, well, while, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34657039711 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.65571784458 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606498194946 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 148.374245294 49.4020404114 300% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 246.833333333 106.682146367 231% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.1666666667 20.7667163134 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.6666666667 7.06120827912 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257042285613 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128823003581 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07932977222 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155053980458 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635175926128 0.056905535591 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.9 13.0946893788 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.33 50.2224549098 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.64 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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