Many old cities around the world are going through a major process of modernization. What are the advantages and disadvantages of modernization?
In contemporary time, a majority of ancient towns around the globe are under massive transformation for becoming smart cities. There are a myriad of benefits as well as drawbacks of this trend. Both the aspects are elucidating in ensuing paragraphs.
Pondering the light on brighter side, the foremost argument is that process of modernization will bolster the economy of country. In the process of making cities advance, it will attract a lot of investment and consequently it will generate employments. This has direct positive impact on growth of the town and so country also. For example, constructing advance bridges in town will generate job opportunities for local residents as well as it will boost the demand of cement, metal and equipment. Therefore it will benefit to such industries to a large extent.
Examining the darker side of modernization, the primary reason is that it will detriment the aura of the ancient towns. Such kind of cities are usually less developed but offers very peaceful life and less population. As modernization will attract many industries there and so people will be inclined to shift to new developed town, a true smell of such towns will be lost.
To conclude and recapitulate, it is quite conspicuous from aforesaid deliberation that there are a plethora of merits of modernization like bolstering to the economy of country with the growth of industry as well as generating a lot of employment for local people. However, the other side also claim a loss of real charm of town with pollution and disturbing peaceful life. I believe, modernization is good but it should be done with keeping the true sense of ancient cities intact.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07942238267 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97266059649 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541516245487 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9414898453 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119705821561 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396090914403 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448912556641 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716441265986 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135460786942 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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