Many people are spending a lot of money on their weddings.
Do you think this is a good thing?
Marriage is an important event in a person’s life, so everyone wants to make it memorable. The trend of the expensive marriage ceremony is burgeoning in our society; however, I believe that this is a preposterous thing because this phenomenon results in a waste of hard-earned money, and raises many social issues in society.
To embark with, people work hard to make both ends meet by doing an odd job, along with a full-time job to save money for their wedding ceremony. Therefore, this money spends on orchestra, firework and, high-class food to make the event attractive for the audience. However, the gratification of the audience is futile for themselves, instead, this money could be spared for their future such as child health care, education. For example, a recent survey report published in the Daily Times revealed that 40% of couples after marriage run in debt and they have to borrow money from their parents and friends for their medical, and other basic expenses.
What is more, expensive weddings develop a sense of inferiority in people who cannot afford to arrange a lavish event. While in peer pressure, they want to show off their kith and kin, people borrow a hefty amount to pay wedding bills. As a result, become bank defaulter, adding stress and frustration to their lives which has a horrifying effect on society such as broken marriages. For example, the United Nations’ annual report stated that 5% of the suicide case in all over the world revealed that failure to pay back the cash which was borrowed leads them to take this extreme step.
To conclude, people are augmenting their wedding expenses to make it worth remembering; however, this essay argued that it is bad for society and people such as becoming penny-less after the event, adding up psychological pressure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0396039604 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66299210935 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617161716172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.58622176 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.818181818 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218764363507 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784744379081 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455027537469 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125258926285 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351274948461 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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