Many people are working longer hours. Why is this happening? What problems can this cause to people?
It is true that do overtime is more common to many people in today’s society. There are a number of reasons behind this phenomenon, which is having a significant impact on both family life and on the community as a whole.
There are two primary reasons why workers tend to work long hours. One reason is that they can have more job prospects, particularly higher positions and better payments. Since they have dedicated all their time and effort to work, employers will notice and they will eventually be given promotions with a greater amount of salary. For example, a college grad who ready to put all her time and energy into finishing tasks will probably impress bosses with their performances. Therefore, they can be promoted sooner than other staff. Furthermore, nowadays, daily expenses of a family has been rising day-by-day, such as the money spent on groceries, petroleum and so on. In this context, it is hard for a man to run a family with a single job or regular working hours so they are forced to work more.
However, this trend could have some negative consequences in terms of both individuals' lives and the public. An important concern for having long working hours is the decline of the physical and mental health of these corporate employees. This is due to the fact that working overtime can lead to a lack of sufficient rest, decrease in energy and also health conditions in extreme cases. Another adverse effect is that it damages their relationships with others. Such an exhausting schedule still intrudes far enough into the private life of these workers or other social connections.
In conclusion, there are various reasons for evolving into a longer and more gruelling work schedule. As a result, there could be negative influences on individual families and society at large.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cases. Another adverse effect is that it damages their relationships with others....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93442622951 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66229508197 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593442622951 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.704679509 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0625 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188515915209 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056044507554 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512437212338 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107210349244 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034064984545 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.