I will agree to the fact that criminals should be imprisoned as they have not behaved in a normal way during a particular instance and should be punished for that. But i would also like to say that prison or jails, as called in most of the countries should be renamed to correction facilities. Because, as someone has said, we have to kill the crime and not the criminal .!
In support of my above thought, i would like to quote an example set by a prison in my country, India. In one of the prison, the authorities had joined hands with a software company to train their inmates on computer and programming skills. The company designed a special curriculum for people of such age and mentality to help them in honing their skills and knowledge. The inmates that went through the curriculum were interviewed by the same company and were offered jobs accordingly. Such an exercise can help the prison-mates to think and act like a normal human being and lead a respectable life once they have completed their term in prison.
In addition to the above, the inmates should also be given a chance to complete their education, be it school or college, which they have left in-between. Education will help in changing their mindset which will further fuel their approach towards the society. This will help them in becoming a better human being.
In the end, i would like to say that man is God's superior creation. We have to preserve and nurture this creation of God to make this world a better place for living, irrespective of his or her past.
- The best way to solve environmental problems caused by consumer-generated waste is for towns and cities to impose strict limits on the amount of trash they will accept from each household.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree 33
- Some people argue that successful leaders in government, industry, or other fields must be highly competitive. Other people claim that in order to be successful, a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others.Write a response in which you disc 50
- People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting 50
- Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In 92
- State your purpose 16
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a normal way" with adverb for "normal"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... be imprisoned as they have not behaved in a normal way during a particular instance and should...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ce and should be punished for that. But i would also like to say that prison or j...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e to kill the crime and not the criminal .! In support of my above thought, i...
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Suggestion:
...ill the crime and not the criminal .! In support of my above thought, i would ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
....! In support of my above thought, i would like to quote an example set by a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...d hands with a software company to train their inmates on computer and programmin...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...ng a better human being. In the end, i would like to say that man is Gods supe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65328467153 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56294252377 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56204379562 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1199257662 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.25 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135969757349 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509925421785 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660229305775 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882822345708 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777848493008 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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