Nowadays, people work hard and spend more time at work in order to meet their needs. Although, it is important for one to be able to find a means of survival, but the duration at which we work impacts negatively on our lives. Having a balance between the way we work and live is equally important.
Firstly, most people means of livelihood is to work long hours in order t be able to provide for their families. Some humans do more than one job a day thereby spending considerable time outside of their families and also ignore some other important activities. The cost of living in most control is relatively high and this affects the manner people engage in paid activities. Although it is highly pertinent we work in order to survive and meet our basic needs, but this action if taken to the extreme affects our life pattern.
on the other hand, in as much as it is important to work hard, it is also considered necessary to maintain a positive attitude towards life. Work-life balance should be incorporated in our schedule. Not having enough time to rest, bond with family and engage in other activities may affect our outlook on life generally. It can also adversely impact on our health. Being in good health, sound mind is necessary to be able to focus at work. Moreover, our friends and families must not suffer as a result of our actions, they also need to be cared about and requires our attention.
In conclusion, in as much as it is important to work hard, I am of the opinion that relaxation should not be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
... extreme affects our life pattern. on the other hand, in as much as it is imp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, so, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60727272727 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53992646474 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530909090909 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5377640107 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226857535327 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876382204897 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585058659149 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143961349532 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067282396127 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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