It is believed by majority that money cannot buy the most crucial things in life and it is free. In my opinion, I agree that things that truly matter in life like happiness, friends, love, family can't be bought.
Money cannot bring happiness always, as it can only be used to buy material comfort which is also important in life but not essential ones. For example I have seen many people with poor financial background enjoying their life with what they have, while wealthy people leading a miserable life. In other words, happiness is not found in the value of money one has, rather than that it is found in our inner self, when we share and care for other people.
Another point to consider is that the most beautiful thing in life are love and friendship and neither can be bought with the wealth one possess. For example, family and parents love is the most valuable gift one can have in this life. It do not matter whether the person is poor or not, family will always stay together and will support and guide their children at the time of difficulty.
Finally, relationships with our loved ones are actually that keeps us going forward and which also adds more beauty to our life. Having a poor financial status does not mean you cannot have a meaningful relationship. In fact, having a nice heart, good character and a kind personality will definitely win lots of people's heart than having a rich financial background with a bossy attitude.
To conclude, it is true that money matters in life, but things like love, care, family, friends which makes us humane are actually free.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e like happiness, friends, love, family cant be bought. Money cannot bring happin...
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Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'does'?
Suggestion: does
...able gift one can have in this life. It do not matter whether the person is poor o...
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Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...actually that keeps us going forward and which also adds more beauty to our life....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, if, so, while, for example, in fact, in my opinion, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69039145907 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32060670647 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572953736655 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2733080746 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.833333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227986980144 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898156393656 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623722549082 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131136069748 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584180794265 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.