Mass media has been impacting society and individuals for a long time. From my point of view, the news and the views presented by media certainly affect our society.
For instance, countless products are being advertised by media in the form of newspaper, television, and radio which may help consumers while deciding upon a product, which has more appealing qualities. Additionally, the elections of government in several countries are greatly influenced by media, it helps in presenting agenda, facts, and views of politicians which motivates voters to elect their candidates and form a government. Also, it has been widely seen, media provides people with information about other cultures and countries the political and cultural development about other countries and contributes to the globalization. Furthermore, the media also promotes entertainment among people, they learn about movies, cultural shows, and numerous medium of entertainment through media.
However, media can also be misleading by presenting incorrect information about products and merchandise, it can affect the market greatly. Further, the media can be biased as well, for example, in America NewsChannel CNN always supports Democratic party, while Fox channel always favors the Republicans, which is entirely based upon their preferences and political agendas. Moreover, the media often tend to spread religious and communal propaganda among the people through their medium and they follow them blindly, which results in unnecessary fear and unrest in society.
To recapitulate, media provide a ton of information which can be beneficial if interpreted wisely. Certainly, the media impact our lives more positive way then the negative, if the source of news is verified and unbiased.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...edia impact our lives more positive way then the negative, if the source of news is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68510638298 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03492273348 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612765957447 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5003539812 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.6 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111794867077 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477355489355 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249475193009 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06674727065 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275612206386 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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