People received tons of news nowadays, especially about the celebrity that tremendous individuals care about it. I believe it is a good thing because of celebrity is the spice of life, who have played an important role in people's life.
First and foremost, people admire a celebrity who have enormous wealth that they do not have. It is motivated normal people to put their effort on daily life. It will encourage people to achieve their target of life. For instance, a famous actor who took an interview on TV. The host asks him about the success that he made. He said he gains the power from a speech of a movie star who said what he did is made one success from uncountable failures, all by his hands not lucky. Another significant reason in favor is people take that as chatting material which could feel more closer through the same topic such as friends reunion.
Individuals interested in public figure is the people who want to be. Apparently, it leads adult to educate their children. Most of the celebrity is willing to show the positive side which the story is from normal people to a successful man. For example, it is common to watch enormous video online about how the celebrity succeed. In addition, if someone were influenced by a famous star to learn some skills that can be a benefit in their entire life. It will have a chance to get an excellent job and change their career.
In conclusion, interest in celebrity is a good thing because they are an important role in some way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 573, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'closer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: closer
...t as chatting material which could feel more closer through the same topic such as friends ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6404494382 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47255694635 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573033707865 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3314322375 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4375 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233092794033 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781215453469 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667539866304 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141188324089 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286531208725 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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