In modern world, both men and women are working to run a family in a smooth manner and so they divide their household duties. But is this kind of distribution is fair for the couples and the society at large? Many people think that only women should take care of home and kids as this is our tradition. However, I strongly disagree with this notion and will provide reasons to justify my view point further in this essay.
To embark upon, equal distribution allows both the partners to relax which is necessary for good health. It is no exaggeration to say that nowadays, due to the hectic schedule one does not get enough time to take rest or to pay attention towards our fitness which in long term is fatal for one's health. For example my friend Anju and her husband, both are working but even after working eight hours in office, Anju had to do all the household chores and look after her son too as her husband did not offer her help at all. Eventually, she fell sick and doctor advised her complete bed rest for one month to recover.
In addition, children require love and care from both the parents as both of them play unreplaceable roles in their growth. Conversely, if only mother will spend more time with them than they will not be able to get emotionally attached to their father which will be quite deplorable. I can reminisce when I was small both my parents used to look after me. My mother used to teach me morale values while my father used to help me doing my home work. Hence, I was close to both of them and it made me feel more secure.
To recapitulate, I would like to mention that imposing all the responsibilities only on one individual is unfair and perilous as every human being has certain limitations beyond which one is prone to get shattered because of loads of work and extreme exhaustion. Therefore, it is crucial to share the responsibilities with our spouse. Lastly, I can state assertively that the benefits of even distribution of tasks between a couple far outweigh any negative repercussions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a smooth manner" with adverb for "smooth"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...n and women are working to run a family in a smooth manner and so they divide their household duti...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...fitness which in long term is fatal for ones health. For example my friend Anju and ...
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Line 5, column 431, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to do' or 'do'.
Suggestion: to do; do
... values while my father used to help me doing my home work. Hence, I was close to bot...
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Line 7, column 409, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat the benefits of even distribution of tasks between a couple far outweigh any ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, hence, however, if, lastly, look, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59178082192 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5876331607 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578082191781 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2900024869 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.75 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8125 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185000309845 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559889251686 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423784266767 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107025539479 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719370647715 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.