communication tools such as email and messaging play an important role in our modern life. In this essay, we want to know if these tools reduce our interaction or not? In my view, this modern form of communications has a big impact on developing a social life but some others have opposite believed, they cite people face to face interaction decrease and they feel more alone.
Actually, in the past, people tend to meet each other more than today, because they could not be able to communicate with each other efficiently by tools for that era. For instance, if they want to see each other, they should just arrange a face to face meeting since the short of effective mass media to communicate.
In that time, for example, thirty years ago, letter and telephone were two most important instrument that people use for communicating. This kind of tools had problems such as taking a long time and also high expense, for instance, send a letter to a friend who lived in another country took approximately at least two weeks. Although the cost of a small conversation by telephone was too much in the past.
Although if my memory serves me right, I remember that my aunt had to travel abroad to see his son who lived there, this activity always cost a lot for her, but she did not have other choices. However, modern mass tools such as SMS, email, video chats decrease these heavy costs and make visual communication among people all over the world cheap and simple.
In conclusion, I think new connection media makes a big evaluation in our lives and create valuable ways to simple and efficient communication with all over the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Communication
communication tools such as email and messaging play ...
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Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'instrument' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'instruments'.
Suggestion: instruments
...r and telephone were two most important instrument that people use for communicating. This...
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Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... took approximately at least two weeks. Although the cost of a small conversation by tel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, as to, at least, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70383275261 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5964758423 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613240418118 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.2728206085 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.727272727 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191758532152 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720963910725 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393796281181 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968665387015 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512893758089 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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