There is no doubt that numerous people are moving to cities from rural areas for a better standard of living. However, there are certain problems faced by the residents. The following essay will discuss the problems that arise while living in urban areas along with their solutions.
Firstly, the large population in the cities has led to a housing shortage. For instance, in many big cities, a large number of people have to live in the suburbs because the rent is too high in the city. Consequently, they have to commute to the city to work every day, which leads to the second hurdle - traffic congestion. Indeed, traffic jam is the major concern in so many cities around the world. For example, in India, many individuals living on the outskirts of the city travel daily from their homes to their work. They spent daily around three to four hours on the road because of traffic congestion. Thirdly, there is an increase in pollution due to the population in big cities. For example, water pollution and air pollution have are more severe effects in cities than in small towns.
Every problem has a solution. As a result, hurdles faced by individuals living in a city have their solutions. First and foremost, the government needs to improve public transport infrastructure to reduce traffic congestion problems. This should be taken into consideration as there are commuters every day coming from the outskirts of the city. Thus, the volume of traffic will reduce by improving the public transport facilities. Moreover, city dwellers must raise awareness about how to protect the environment and live in a sustainable way to reduce the effects of pollution. At last, the government should develop small towns by providing more infrastructure facilities for individuals so that the population can be sustained in a particular place whether it is a city or rural area.
To conclude, although living in big cities have their own problems, I believe that we should take measures such as improving public transport and creating awareness among humans about an eco-friendly lifestyle to solve the issues arises while living in urban areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...tage. For instance, in many big cities, a large number of people have to live in the suburbs beca...
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Line 3, column 743, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... water pollution and air pollution have are more severe effects in cities than in s...
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Line 5, column 524, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a sustainable way" with adverb for "sustainable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...how to protect the environment and live in a sustainable way to reduce the effects of pollution. At ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, while, as for, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04507042254 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70714679967 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518309859155 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4671182983 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2631578947 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6842105263 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.68421052632 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206131911384 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662718678451 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603474496096 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136215050833 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742937191309 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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