There has been an argument about public would like chasing and enjoying fashion in some countries, and impacted by the latest trend. Personally, I think that could be a good thing, and will, therefore, discuss the reasons and give my opinion in this essay.
It is true for some countries, espacially developing countries, making more income that before. A significan argument in faovour is that people tend to concentrate on themselves after getting more money, such as to look younger or become pretty. To buy fancy cosmestics or latest fashionable clothes becoming so popular. Another issue wothy of consideration relates to the idea that brand companies are inviting some faviourate celebrities to endorsement on belf their products, which is simply attracted by public.
In my opinion, to chase fashion is advantage outweigh disadvantage. First and foremost, it helps people to build strong mental attitude over wearing newly release cholthes or using hi-tech cell phone, thus improving their self-confidence as well as encouraging life quality, forthermore, it makes people satisfy themselves, creating more employability. For instance, there were my co-work who has several dark black spots on her face and never dress up well. After accepted my advices to hava a treatment on her face and buy some stunning chothes, she became extremely confidence so when she got a chance to participate a project making everything perfect and meet their goals. I would like to say that improvement is from outside to inside and change the person wholly.
In conclusion, I believe to follow the trend and chase the fashion maybe is the best thing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24242424242 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85757736431 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674242424242 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9475089967 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146560398047 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563806735964 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652063037002 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932627916783 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265660634109 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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