Lack of sleep has become one of the most common problem across the globe. Having sleepless nights can cause a person to function less as well as triggers a lot of health related problems, like cardiac issues and other mental illness. To overcome such situation individuals should manage their screen timing during their sleep time, also refreshment activities can be done to calm and relax oneself before going to bed, which can be helpful to have a good sleep.
In today's busy life, people are often sleep deprived due to their super busy work or study schedule. Such individuals often face many health related issues like heart attack, stroke and blood pressure due to insomnia. Insufficient sleep can make a person less productive, as it is commonly known that a person cannot function properly without sleep. A research conducted by Neuroscience Magazine stated that to work efficiently an adult needs an undisturbed sleep of 8 hours. Also, it is said that a person can survive without food for 10 days but will die in 3 days without sleep.
Getting proper sleep is really important, this can be achieved in many ways. One of the most common reason for sleepless night is over exposure to screens of the mobile phones. Screen timings play a huge role for insomnia. It's always advisable that a person should listen to some soft music or read a book before bed time, as doing so helps one to sleep better.
In conclusion, sleeping properly is really important for an individual to be efficient in what they do. So, a person should start focusing og having a good sleep by following a better night routine that help them for a good night sleep.
- Nowadays people are spending more time in workplace and staying away from home for work Discuss its advantages and disadvantages with your own experiences 78
- Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children Do you agree or disagree 67
- In many places new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the countryside Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there What is your opinion about this 73
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced 89
- Many large supermarkets are being built today while the number of small shops is decreasing Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 91
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...hts can cause a person to function less as well as triggers a lot of health relate...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
...y schedule. Such individuals often face many health related issues like heart attack, strok...
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Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oke and blood pressure due to insomnia. Insufficient sleep can make a person les...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79370629371 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45402989027 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8664665384 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9285714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356481776577 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119624607151 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842245014204 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21668456097 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579921721727 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.