Nowadays many people working from home. Some think it is beneficial to the employee, others think it may distract the family routine. What is my opinion?
The World has become a global village. Nowadays in many developed countries work from home concept is replacing office 9 to 5 job shifts. A group of people asserts that working from home has many advantages to the workers, whereas another group is of the view that this approach may adversely affect the house routine. I shall discuss both perspectives in detail before reaching a final verdict.
To begin with, continuing a job from home has enormous benefits. First and foremost is the flexible timings to complete the working hours. Furthermore, less commuting means less traffic congestion hassle and less fuel consumption resulting in cost saving. I would like to quote my personal example here; while I was at home owing to my maternity period, I opted for a home-based data entry job. I ended up earning a reasonable amount at the of the month with no fatigue of going to the office or leaving my child at the daycare center.
On the contrary, there are certain negative aspects of this phenomenon as well. Predominantly, home-based jobs disturb the house routine as many people could not balance between house and office tasks, which resultantly failed at both ends. Moreover, while working from home one cannot focus on a certain task or attend a meeting with concentration as their mind is doing multitasking continuously between house chores and office work.
To recapitulate the aforementioned argument, I opine that working in the office is a more rational approach if one can afford daily commuting and can spare time for an office job. However, if doing a job is inevitable and house responsibilities cannot be handed over to anyone than home based work is a considerable approach. In the future, it is expected that more and more people will inclined towards home based jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 388, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'incline'
Suggestion: incline
...expected that more and more people will inclined towards home based jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97342192691 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80367572396 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594684385382 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4204935586 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19197531114 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063465341719 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612105588454 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123466841112 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565721243489 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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