Nowadays young people know less about traditions and culture than in the past. What are the reasons for it? What can be done to improve this situation?
In this prevailing era people do not know about the customs as compared to earlier. this is happened, because due to some career options available in metro cities not in countryside areas so, people live in nuclear families. but an education can sort this matter very well. In subsequent pragrahs it will be discussed with facts.
after receiving the degree of higher qualification people move towards searching suitable job in which they can aquire smart amount of salary packages and other facilities like accommodation, pension after retirement, medical, insurance and many more. These kind of amenties only be possible in developed cities where the places of living are very small and expensive so, more than 5 member could not be adjusted in one flat. that is the only reason why people choose to live in nuclear families and deprived their chidren and themselve from the love and affection of their elders. Therefore they are unable to know about the regional customs.
but solutions are not out of reach, if schools will start this tradition learning as an optional subject then those who are willing to learn about their rules and custom they will opt that particular subject and learn about the culture of the society. For example, music is a subject through which people can easily learn about the style of living their ancestors. it is also possible that they may adobt those hobbies and become familiar with society very well.
Conclusively, it os being common in people to avoid their rituals because the exsistence of small family culture. but somehow this trend is not a favourable approach.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07462686567 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49023488261 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60447761194 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.913880889 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.615384615 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202422062015 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707682449102 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386919677309 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117947806032 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283898691693 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.