In the recent times, the influence of advertisements on general public has been significantly increasing. The businessmen are aware of this fact to a large extent as a result they try to advertised it a way that people think that it is unique and exclusive. This essay will discuss the potential causes behind this worrying trend. If questioned, on balance, I believe that it has many drawbacks and harm consumers in long term.
Behind this type of branding, there are numerous causes play vital role. First and foremost one is that constant earge of individuals to stay up-to-date with electronic gadgets and other products. A good illustration of this is iPhone. They launch new product every year with minor changes in design and camera, they pretend it like one of a kind product. In addition, very little knowledge about manufacturing process. The majority are not aware about the product specifications and materials which are used for manufacturing. They purchase it just show-off infront of their friends and family.
Discussing the negative side of this, has number of cons for their end uses. Firstly, they waste huge amount of money on that similar thing. The flagship products are cost more money than old one at the same time customer gets products with negligible importants. The old device is probably all the same tasks without problem which new one can dose, it is just waste of financial resources. Secondly, they increase the amount of pollution in the environment. After buying new things, people throw old one in to garbage and at the end, they just increase solid waste in landfills.
In conclusion, promotion of products it is not morally incorrect; however, promote it in a misleading way is unethical. People tend to buy because they want to flaunt and show-off but the negatives should be consider by the organisations before andorse any commercial.
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...cifications and materials which are used for manufacturing. They purchase it just...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a misleading way" with adverb for "misleading"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... morally incorrect; however, promote it in a misleading way is unethical. People tend to buy becaus...
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Message: Did you mean 'considered'?
Suggestion: considered
...nd show-off but the negatives should be consider by the organisations before andorse any...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, all the same, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07395498392 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81523327706 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604501607717 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.303624351 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0526315789 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3684210526 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103141123373 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318117142777 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332323850603 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636908519893 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326049676564 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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