In this contemporary era, technology had its footstep in everyplace ranging from workplace to house. Individuals are likely to depend more on online world for entertainment rather than conventional methods. I partially accede to this statement and this essay will further discuss about it.
To commence with, in past few decades people had started using internet to learn about news as well as other medias because it provides descriptions of the information with the help of both image presentation and notes. Therefore, it not only plays role of newspaper but also act as television. For instance, applications such as google which act as search engine so on just one click will provide informative data. As a result, it saves time and money. Moreover, internet is very handy matter as it can be carried to everyplace.
On contrary to this, e-world being easy to resuscitate or time saving though it is difficult for older masses to operate, whereas it is convenient to go for either rag or television. Furthermore, traditional methods for entertainment or fetching update of world requires no internet access as well as smart gadgets. For example, press such as Time of India provides local and international news with image and data. In addition television also furnish audio video information which is straightforward to understand.
To recapitulate, i would reiterate that humans use internet for various purpose as it is easy to use and laborious, but still it is having few drawbacks likewise internet access, knowledge to operate it and so on. However, traditional methods does not have special requirements and hence older people finds them as a boon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18888888889 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01930005788 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0430490581 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.071428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3571428571 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125025624086 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389122389637 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481571862572 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070558262498 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515667350612 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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