Across the globe it has been witnessed that sleeping practice had been changed drastically, that is, a signinficant proportion of people sleep less. There are numerous factors influencing this change with negative impacts on people own life and same will be elaborated further.
Firstly, there is a need to explore the reasons for such a decline in sleeping hours. It is worth noting that competitive world had given birth to significant pros and cons. One such benefit is enormous income to those who show excellent performance. Behind this achevement much of the time is exhausted on different work related chores, as a consequence of it people sleep less. On the other hand, some people are economically deprived. They had to work hard for endless nights to earn bread and butter, even, many of the young ones are having a huge parental responsibility. Hence, sleeping less is not their choice, indeed a neccessity.
This sleeping diversity had shown plethora of grim effects on individual as well as in society. Utiliing the sleep time on work may make a person excel in particular task, but, overall this could have an adverse affect as people after some years will be less productive. Body requires an adequate amount of rest and not providing will lead to less energetic life. As a matter of fact, WHO had stated that in coming 3-4 years 45% of the young population will suffer from serious health ailments because of reduction in sleeping hours. Even, it was also stated that the health index is declining at faster pace due to this unusual practice.
Considering and keenly examining all the above-cited information, it can be recaptiulated that for achiving goals people are sacrifising there sleep. Goals are not worth without a prosperous health, so they have to distribute their time wisely without compromising the sleep hours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, well, in particular, as a matter of fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04901960784 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73381786011 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601307189542 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5096267757 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309747258911 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970556872909 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732281293102 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187997190863 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304234911122 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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