It is believed that severe homesickness often hit people who going abroad for working or studying for period. This essay will briefly explain about the several reasons that might contribute and the possible solutions to tackle with this issue.
Nowadays, it is reported that people who life abroad and away from home are frequently suffered from homesickness. This condition might be triggered by their hard work or study load or a culture shock condition. A survey conducted in Germany said that the majority of international student miss their home badly because they experienced culture shock such as different language and difficulties to find friends. Additionally, A qualitative study interviewing international employees at a famous company revealed that their hard work load and deadlines are the main factors associated to their homesickness.
To mitigate the problem, there are several solutions could be offered. Firstly, it is suggested to the universities or companies to provide counseling facilities in order to help students or workers not feeling lonely. Furthermore, it is also recommended for students to join extracurricular activities or social clubs for employee because through that way, students and employee would find the best way to interact with others, learn something new and definitely make new friends. Therefore, they would not be only thinking about their home and might be get used to their environment and have other opportunity to develop their self quality.
In conclusion, homesickness is mostly caused by cultural shock and high activity load. However, having counseling and joining social clubs and extracurricular events would be possible to reducing the feeling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54580152672 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00984390049 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595419847328 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8511405322 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.083333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215258253703 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775253780798 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081269778857 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130507844042 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906356476914 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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