Nowadays, in some countries the proportion of young adults are bigger than older generations. There are some advantages and disadvantages caused by this situation. However, I personally disagree that the benefits exceed the drawbacks because of several reasons.
On the one side, younger generations are more fresh and healthier if compared to the older people. This is because people's bodies and minds perform maximally during age 20s to 30s. This situation enables younger people to learn new knowledge easily and adapt easily to any working environment. Their good performance in work place will also affect economic development of a country and therefore give positive benefit to the country.
On the other side, young adults mostly have lazier personality traits if compared to older generations. This is because they are no longer live in era where everything is hard to get and technology has not developed massively. Even though the are more fresh and healthier than older people, their working attitude will cause them to be less productive than older people. Of course having types of inhabitants like this is not beneficial for the development of a country. For example, Niger is dominated by a lot of young generations which have lazy work ethic. As a result, its country is ranked as one of the poorest countries in the world.
In conclusion, I personally disagree that the advantages of having more young adults in a country exceed its drawbacks, because even though younger generations are more fresh and healthier if compared to the older people, they have lazier working attitude which will result to less productive generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22556390977 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78782149153 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507518796992 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4025708634 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2857142857 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183777973651 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074541837646 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601172139707 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133163968785 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445767058304 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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