Vaccination is an artificial way of protecting children from various diseases. There many ways and stages of preparing vaccines and most popular way is to introduce deactivated virus geneome code into our system. Thus our body prepare suitable antibodies when it has to combat origin attack. Coming to the discussion, whether government should make it obligatory to parents for immunising children is social issue rather than a medical one. Before arriving to conclusion let us familiarise with the topic,in this essay and decide according to experts opinions.
Usually human body is well equipped with techniques to defend us from harmful parasite invasion. However, because of either weak immune system or genetical reasons, some times it needs external help in form of medicines and treatment. In case of vaccine, to put medical terms, principle prevention is better than cure is applicable. In other words, our health system is upgraded to deal with upcoming ailment rather than fighting it after attack. Whereas, those who argue against inoculation point out, that allergic reaction caused by injecting foriegn material itself is risky. Having said that, immunology experts opine nearly 20% children in African nations and 15% in Asia are largely affected from deadly viruses like Measeles, Chicken pox as a result of this baseless notion. Moreover, some people with religious sentiments fear that it is sin to act against nature's will and might be punished for this in afterlife. For example, some tribes in South America still doesn't use any medicines when they get sick, instead isolate themselves from rest of group and let their body to heal itself.
It is agreed, our anatomy is designed in a manner to resist all sort of disorders, but only to certain extent. Modern lifestyle and heavy population diminished our immunity, thus making us vulnerable. True parents concern over children is far more than anybody else. Nonetheless, it doesn't mean that they can go against their kids welfare for archaic values. Furthermore, significant number of viral attacks come at tender age making children future even more complicated. Hence, in my own opinion, it's prime and paramount duty of government to mandate every parent and guardian to take measures for giving immunisation to their children. In order to involve everyone, we should debunk myths associated with vaccination and bring awareness by education. Countries, for example, like India and UK followed this method and declared their lands as Polio free nations. Many other countries are in queue to do so and Uganda recently declared 0 Cow pox cases this year.
In a nutshell, we can safely conclude that there is no logical reason for denying vaccination to our children and infact for their healthy future we should immunise them. Afterall, today's children are tomorrow's citizens. It's hard to expect illiterate and background community to expect understand this. Nevertheless, it's government job to implement in 'directive principles of state policy' for strong and healthy nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, still, thus, well, whereas, as to, for example, sort of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2570.0 1615.20841683 159% => OK
No of words: 485.0 315.596192385 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29896907216 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67963985696 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 316.0 176.041082164 180% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651546391753 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 817.2 506.74238477 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2176663575 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8461538462 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6538461538 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65384615385 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177069909984 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417201175574 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352988515759 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104290872103 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162713399025 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 165.0 78.4519038076 210% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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