Prevention of disease before it occur is more beneficial than spending large amount of money on researching and treating syndrome. In my opinion, preventive measures should be given more emphasis over treating misery.
At the outset, there are diverse reasons why preventive heath care is considered as vital but most conspicuous one stems from the fact that avoidance of disease aid benefits to individuals. Government and non-government organization are distributing free-vaccinations to help children, who often became victim of disastrous disease , to improve their health condition. For an instance, children are provided with various vaccines like polio, malaria, and chicken pox at early stage of life , adding to prohibition contamination and poor health. Therefore, a person can also prevent from risking cancer using preventive measures.
Moreover, pursing preventive measure ensure healthy environment and peace in the society. For example,in Nepal, there are lots of village where there is no toilet facilities, which results in unhygienic surrounding and thereafter causing dysentery, diarrhea in those society. Thus, campaign must be started in order to built toilets in those village, providing precautionary care save lives.
However, ensuing preventive measure cost a lot of money, which cannot be affordable by local people, whatever their situation may be. Besides, healthy food and good exercise can prevent variety of disease in human. Though it may be hard for some people to follow precautionary measure at times, but it will definitively uplift good health in the future, or at any time.
In conclusion, we should spend sufficient money on treatment too but high proportion of amount should be spent on health education and preventive measures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., and chicken pox at early stage of life , adding to prohibition contamination and...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...nt and peace in the society. For example,in Nepal, there are lots of village where ...
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Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this society' or 'those societies'?
Suggestion: this society; those societies
...ereafter causing dysentery, diarrhea in those society. Thus, campaign must be started in orde...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63805970149 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02038115674 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686567164179 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5166057522 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.230769231 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259509881036 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937858446807 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071595465268 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143264764481 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642939979988 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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