Recently, some research appeals that many small shops in our city are closed because more and more people are willing to purchase their goods in large shopping centers or malls. To some extend, I think that it could be a good development, but there are also details I want to clarify.
First of all, how this phenomenon occurred that most of people go the the large shops but not the small one. From my point of view, there are two mainly reasons. Firstly, people are working much more time than before at nowadays, and they normally just do one shopping activity in the weekend to save the time. Therefore, selecting the bigger shops which could provide more categories of goods as well as have a cheaper price than tiny shop is the first option. Secondly, it usually has some playing places for keeping the children for parents when they are doing the shopping. Eventually, the kids are well looked after in the playground then parents could enjoy their shopping time. Thus, I believe that people's life are ease by shopping in the greater place.
However, the closing of loads of small shops means that there are many people are losing their jobs, which is a really bad news and would bring negative emotion to persons who lose jobs and also unstable factors to our society. So our government need to take into account of this situation and make some plans to let those people find the new jobs.
In conclusion, despite of the bad impact of closing of tiny shops, I argue that there are more positive effects were brought that people are doing more and more shopping in larger shops.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...arge shopping centers or malls. To some extend, I think that it could be a good develo...
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Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... all, how this phenomenon occurred that most of people go the the large shops but not the smal...
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Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...nomenon occurred that most of people go the the large shops but not the small one. From...
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Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...nomenon occurred that most of people go the the large shops but not the small one. From...
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Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...more and more shopping in larger shops.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, i think, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68327402135 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17495085362 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5871886121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9298382932 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.75 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267436494204 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923749939866 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691379470848 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154767434106 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385218366422 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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