Watching television or reading novels in free time has become a contentious topic in recent times. Majority of people argue that many brain fuctions develop with reading; however, watching television makes them lazy. I completely agree with this sentiment and this essay will examine it.
First of all, reading has countless advantages on human health. One of the primary benefit is that many existential body functions continue work properly, since brain which is vitally important organ arranges a plethora of body fuctions such as hormone level, hunger and sleepness. If people read newsletters and novels at least an hour daily, they will stay healtier in the near future. For instance, a study by World Health Organisation in 2018 revealed that Japanese who have the highest longevity in the world read two hundreds factual books in average per year. It is believed that it is good for not only mental health but also psychological health.
Secondly, watching television has detrimental effects on human. To begin with, it does not require any efforts as it provides ready packed information. Many viewers, for example, feel tired when they watched it longer than three hours given the fact that brain stops working during this time, and thus tiredness is risen. Further and more importantly, it prevents people especially children develop creative thinking. To illustrate, a report from University of Sea in 2017 reported that 80% of toddlers watch cartoons frequently consequently they are not able to draw and play as they are supposed to do.
By way of conclusion, while reading makes people have a healty life, watching television prevents fatal organs work properly, and thus I would strongly contend that people should not watch television frequently instead they should read magazines and novels to stay healthy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun brain seems to be countable; consider using: 'many brains'.
Suggestion: many brains
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, at least, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26279863481 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63125101949 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645051194539 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2233058903 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.142857143 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9285714286 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156139621291 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548602352851 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366203839411 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986622410121 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347966334953 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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