It is obvious that nowadays many big shopping complexes are opening. As a result, an increasing number of small local vendors are closing their business since buyers are approaching large malls. In my view, this is a positive aspect because it provides various things in one roof and solves the problem of parking.
Large shopping centers provide customers a range of products in one place. This is why many people prefer buying goods in one place instead of going to many shops. To illustrate, in recent years such complexes sell all types of brands, local goods, electronics, sports equipment under one roof along with the food and movies for entertainment. It attracts more and more people there, in the past people had to go shop to shop to find suitable products.
Another merit of this change is it comes with the convenience of parking. These malls developed dedicated parking places for the customer where you can park your vehicle. Which helps the people to focus on their shopping, without being worried about their vehicle safety. In the past, people used to be anxious about their car being towed away by the local police and had to pay fine for parking in the road. What’s more, people had to travel long after parking since nearby shops don’t sell the goods they want, now this is resolved by the shopping centers.
In conclusion, many people prefer shopping in a large shopping centre as a result increasing number of small local sellers are shutting down there business. I would see it as a positive changes because people now can choose variety of goods in the single location and it offers customer worry free shopping experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 414, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'shop to'.
Suggestion: shop to
...ple there, in the past people had to go shop to shop to find suitable products. Another merit ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, in conclusion, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89361702128 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39661750474 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7066423096 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5714285714 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393616967442 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12657001643 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737084513007 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241125154049 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439778435382 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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