Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Aborting a child is a very sensitive issue. Nowadays, it is quite common particularly in western countries. As compared to previous decade, it has become a controversial debate across the globe owing to its drastic increase. Some people assert that abortion should be banned, while other's are of the opinion that it should be legalize. Let's discuss both views in detail before reaching to final verdict.
To begin with, legalizing abortion has enormous disadvantages, for instance; the first and the foremost is the abortion impact on mother's mental and physical health. Being pregnant means, you are preparing your body to bring a living things into the world and body changes its structure and functions accordingly. Whereas, with abortion mother's physical condition gets disturbed. The other most important factor that cannot be overlooked is the impact over society. If abortion is being legalized, it is a cue to new generation to get involved in unethical activities freely as they can prevent consequences afterwards easily. legalizing abortion is fatal to moral and ethical values of any society.
On the contrary, people consider it as an essential step towards society betterment. People with this mindset believe that by legalizing abortion they can save their children from untimely responsibility of becoming parent and other related circumstances they may face.
To recapitulate, i strongly appose that abortion should be legalized, as it has severe impact not only on mother's health but also on society as a whole. Every thing should be done in timely manner & one should only become parent when they are ready for it. By banning abortion, we can somehow prevent unwanted situations.
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Nowadays abortion has an…
Nowadays abortion has an option to born or restricted enterence for new comers. At present one of the most controversial topic is drastically growth of abortion however a portion of people want to abortion must be valid. I discuss both the opinion and draw my decision at the end.
Many people chose the abortion as their better option while they are not prepared to give birth a baby. But always this scenario is not true. The several abortion case are happned for misuse whether people are not consious on their physical fantasy or they are unlikely to take responsibilities. Therefore they would be used it for escape their liabilities. Thus, abortion are going to be rushing as it's a great problem dor medical as well as social welfare.
On the other hand, people should be given the right to whether they are want to born or give up their unborn baby. It does not be restricted by some kind of rules or messures due to social value. The impact is prelious for all when abortion might be accentuated as crime. Some country such as third world country is treating abortion as equally to murder. As a consequences of this phenomena are creating a large number of born baby which might be killed or througn to dustbin after their birth. Therefore It is a common picture of maximum portion of world.
To encapsulate my discussion i throughly support those people who think give abortion in a legal form. Also i believe this kind of steps would be reduced spontaneous growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, look, may, so, whereas, while, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83488991123 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7580401796 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4375 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350187538255 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988842779998 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803332809176 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201191362274 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860351761011 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.