These days the quantity of re-wrongdoers are expanding bit by bit, the measurable reports are obvious for re irritating. There are bounty purposes behind recommitting the wrongdoing for hoodlums. In this paper I will talk about all the potential purposes behind re irritating, will give the achievable answers for lessen the wrongdoing rate.
In the first place, the greater part of the crooks are recommitting wrongdoings to meet their essential needs. Neediness is the most importantly purpose behind violations, down and out took real segment in the wrongdoing proportion. In the event that we see the measurements, the wrongdoing rate is more in the nations which are lives down neediness line. Second noticeable factor is, nowadays our general public is loosing virtues, they turned out to be increasingly voracious and eager, prepared to carry out violations to secure more resources. They won't have dread towards our law for re irritating. At last, guilty parties are not grasped by our general public, they generally consider them as culprits however they are free from their decision. Thus, offenders were not able find legitimate occupation for their survival, in this way they were back to illicit exercises.
Some pragmatic arrangements must be actualized to diminish the rate of re-affronting. Right off the bat, the administration need to designate spending plan to kill destitution and give a few cleansers to the general population to meet their the two finishes. The administering body should take measures to give legitimate instruction and wellbeing to each individual resident. Furthermore, The experts should make a few changes to the law, the decision ought to be differed from wrongdoers and re-guilty parties. Some draconian principles ought to be composed for re-guilty parties. At last, government should begin recovery communities for offenders. Where they can discover some compensation to win their meat and potatoes. Also, it ought to give mental guiding to the offenders who are unfit.
To close, it is well established reality that the re-wrongdoers are expanding step by step because of different reasons as previously mentioned. The administration needs to take preventive measures to lessen it. What's more, the view of the general public towards offenders should change, Once criminal is anything but a criminal constantly. They should allow to endure gently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: OBVIOUS_FOR[1]
Message: The adjective obvious is normally used with 'to': 'obvious to re'.
Suggestion: obvious to re
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Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...cond noticeable factor is, nowadays our general public is loosing virtues, they turned out to ...
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
..., guilty parties are not grasped by our general public, they generally consider them as culpri...
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Line 7, column 213, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
... take preventive measures to lessen it. Whats more, the view of the general public to...
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Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... lessen it. Whats more, the view of the general public towards offenders should change, Once c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, thus, well, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41066666667 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00942046839 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581333333333 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6337572121 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2272727273 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0454545455 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106053259252 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.029946182395 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275638511605 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0644957463691 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00955531948477 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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