To bring a revolutionary change is always very difficult. If we look back in history, we will realize how complicated it is to transform people's notion. Since, almost twenty years, it has become a trend to use private conveyances specially in urban areas. Although, incessant attempts have been made by the governments of almost all the nations to change this scenario but deplorably all trials have been foiled. However, I firmly believe that by resolving few problems , we will certainly be able to achieve this goal.
Firstly, availability of the public transportation should be increased. This can be done by introducing a slew of electronic auto rickshaws, buses and local trains. When common mass will have the option to commute through public vehicles more feasibly and at much cheaper price then they will definitely assimilate this positive change. Additionally, condition of the roads should be improved too. Because, currently roads in our country are in detrimental position. Unless these changes are made, it is intricate to convince public to switch to sundry transportation system.
Secondly, it is essential to spread awareness about the conservation of our ecosystem. More number of seminars should be conducted on large scale to compel people to contemplate the harmful effects of air pollution on plants as it is causing rise in global warming unceasingly.
Conspicuously, when people will learn that pollution is a serious threat not only to this planet but to their offspring as well. I can say assertively that society will inevitably contribute. After all, we all want a better place to live in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 470, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y believe that by resolving few problems , we will certainly be able to achieve th...
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Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...on of the roads should be improved too. Because, currently roads in our country are in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, well, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2337164751 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97483766125 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9420321919 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.375 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143896105517 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416848897084 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420994911493 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818920192023 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232597422665 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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