Nowadays, many individuals, above eighteen, consider shopping as the best way to spend their spare time. I partially agree with the statement and will prove my idea in this essay, moreover, I will also examine the reason of such trend.
To commence with, in modern young society shopping is equal to happiness. In more details, a few years ago a scholar, from French Commercial University, has published a psychological study, in local science magazine, about pros of shopping for the young generation. He claimed that when people buy something new and desired, their body produce a fluid in the blood, which creates a certain mental condition so called "the state of happiness". Furthermore, this fluid reduces the stress, which people accumulate during the day. In this respect, young adults see shopping as a good way to relax and even start to be addicted to those feelings it gives them.
From this perspective, such development can be as beneficial as detrimental. On the one hand, shopping is the safest and most innocent way of having fun in modern young society. Namely, it is not inferior to the feelings after alcohol consumption or smoking, so it might be considered as a perfect and healthy alternative. On the other hand, frequent visits to shopping centres and markets can have a negative impact on economic state of the person. As an evidence, a recent social research, conducted by Texas Science University in 2018, ascertained that shopping makes people addicted the same as alcohol or cigarettes. Sometimes it can even lead a person to debts, as he starts to spend more money than he receives. Generally, shopping could be beneficial in certain limits.
Considering everything, it has become obvious that the main reason of popularity of shopping, among young working generation, is that it makes them feel happy and reduces the daily stress. However, if to do it irresponsibly, it can cause big problems connected with finance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1149068323 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89106416332 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605590062112 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7130231165 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.9375 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167588597208 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515418500211 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381015449892 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870976594658 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290271694695 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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