Should companies (businesses) ensure that they employ a quota (or fixed percentage) of women in all jobs, or is this an impractical concept? Discuss both sides of this debate, and reach a conclusion based on your own opinion.
Workplace quotas have been suggested for some time now, in an attempt to encourage gender equality in the workforce. The issue is not entirely straightforward, although some arguments can also be made against the idea. This essay will discuss the debate and give a concluding view.
On the one hand, it can be said that quotas would allow many benefits to women to enter traditionally male professions, ranging from surgeon to airline pilot. This, it is argued, would expand the pool of people available to do these jobs and reduce inequality between the sexes. Firstly, it helps to maintain a balanced workforce in the organization, which can bring more equality in the workplace. Secondly, On-the-job training helps women to achieve higher productivity and high level of output in job. For instance, a recent study by the IMF shows that 50% of the organisation are using the quota based methodology to maintain diversity in the workplace.
On the other hand those of quota for women cite that the situation can be impractical, meaning it bears no similitude in today's world. Although on-the-job training would be superficial, meaning that it would not only increase the expenditure of the company but also make it difficult for employer to measure the performance of employee.
To conclude, it seems that work quota opens up new avenues for women career growth and development, which can increase the chances of loyalty to company as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sted for some time now, in an attempt to encourage gender equality in the workfor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10504201681 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85098508454 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4027593826 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.454545455 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119512407881 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448214324646 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293479095957 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715008615427 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00931706807477 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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