One of the most prominent aspects of the 21st Century is the online marketing trend, which has influenced youngsters. More and more companies are promoting their goods and services through various social media applications to attract people. I strongly advocate that social media persuade a user’s shopping trend and choices, especially, youths; but, most of the elderly generation are reluctant to buy products online.
While on social media, masses are constantly bombarded with advertisements of various products that are specially designed to intrigue the potential consumers. Most of these adverts on the news feed are not random; the artificial intelligence tracks the search patterns or something in trend and displays the suggestions. As a result of the latest trend among teenagers, they are always most likely to get influenced easily. As per the recent survey conducted by the American Fashion Week Magazine, it was concluded that the sale of products purchased by the youth, which were advertised on several social platforms, has doubled over the past few years.
On the other hand, elderly people do not tend to incline towards new changes easily, as they are comfortable with the traditional methods of shopping. Most of the old age people like to touch and feel the fabric of the cloth or quality of products before purchasing it because they are not impressed easily and choose the best option. To illustrate, my mother does not believe what she sees online and would argue that the products vary in real life as seen on social applications.
In conclusion, although social media can be alluring for the current generation, older people go with their instincts. In my opinion, everyone should buy products according to their requirements instead of being influenced by sites; however, the older generation needs to upgrade themselves and utilize the technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 290, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...gly advocate that social media persuade a user's shopping trend and choices,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79682359512 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613333333333 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.0285380713 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.833333333 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136997893733 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460206290373 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0267498977653 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774096191338 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203736032392 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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