Education is most important tool for a better nation and school is best place to grab it. European schools guide a child in his early age to find the right skills to pursue his endeavour with exposure to all practical skills one could acquire for that job. While other continent schools focus on academic knowledge, perhaps good for some stream student to have in depth knowledge about that subject.
Our nation students are burdened with number of regional languages and subjects which mostly European students does not need to learn as English is foremost way to write, communicate and understand a unanimous language. Moreover, Europe system provide such a environment that students are able to decide on themselves at early age, what profession he would choose to lead a life. Others keep on having knowledge to a little far time period to capitalize to their dream career to lead a happier and successful future. It would be unjustified for a young aspirant to choose his career at a young age so need to have a little knowledge of all trades till student is able to decide career profession.
We can’t deny role of academic knowledgeable people in shaping our world to a more peaceful, beautiful place to survive. There are some streams or career which demands very detailed knowledge until one get his hands on practical session like doctor, engineer, scientist, teacher and many more because that will help him to innovate keeping in mind about society needs. Good governance, Framing of constitution in nations around the world has been done by renowned renowned scholars, lawyers, doctorates, teachers who had excelled in academic excellence in their life.
On the whole Schools need a balanced approach with vocational courses being run from time to time. Parents and teacher should assist their students to reach to its potential by guiding, supporting their child at every stage of life. Government needs to invest in Skill projects to enable people to get valuable skills as well as academic knowledge in building of progressive nation and world.
- university students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it ? 61
- Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult.Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? 73
- In some countries in Europe, some children from the age of 11 or 13 go to schools to learn more practical skills that will help them get a job. Other children stay in schools which provide a more general academic education.What should schools do to prepar 89
- Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate school. Others, however, believe that girls and boys benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, while, as well as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06725146199 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63392520488 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602339181287 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.4271477277 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.307692308 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3076923077 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192620541211 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645821661088 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451082336619 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115061836591 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516046652591 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.