People tend to rent a accommodation to live rather that own it in many countries nowadays. This types of lifestyle has pros and cons which is highly debatable so this essay will analyse the both sides.
To rent a home in desired location is causing tremendous positive impact such as proximity of workplace and avoiding traffic congestion resulting in the saving of money and the time on the road. Without driving to the office, either petrol or vehicle maintenance cost can be saved, which it is able to improve ones life quality or benefit personal goals. Another reason worthy consideration is that people do not have to borden the responsibility of the house because owner has it giving more leisure time for people to joy life.
It is also has negative side of renting a home. First and foremost, frequent relocation is inevitable. The moving costs not only take financial problems but also take unnecessary transportaion and other expences causing in the loss of bank balance. For example, the large family needs rent vehicle and clean service when they are moving from one place to another. The money can be saved for other reasonable purposes relating to benefit the whold family members. Another argument related to the cons is that to negotiation with house owner would spend plenty of time to involve from house wear and tear to emergency cases.
In conclusion, It is true that here are some pros and cons to rent a house but it is also a trend in few countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
People tend to rent a accommodation to live rather that own i...
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Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
People tend to rent a accommodation to live rather that own it in many coun...
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Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[3]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...tries nowadays. This types of lifestyle has pros and cons which is highly debatable...
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Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...n be saved, which it is able to improve ones life quality or benefit personal goals....
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs rent" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'rent' or 'to be rent'.
Suggestion: rent; to be rent
...ce. For example, the large family needs rent vehicle and clean service when they are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81568627451 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58604779812 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603921568627 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.025481889 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162426859282 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649714067234 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800544674619 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103265606078 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262693540658 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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