some countries spend a lot of money bicycle usage easier.why is this?Is this the best solution?
At present, the world is suffering from traffic congestion as well as environmental pollution. For this reason, some countries spend huge money to foster people to use bicycle as part of their commutation. When people use bicycles on day-to-day basis, which will reduce the traffic pileup, air pollution and help to people stay away from diseases. In my view, Such initiative from the government could be a plausible solution for many people to prefer usage of bicycle as part of their life.
Many road accidents have been occurring due to traffic congestion among various cities. For instance, in Japan, the government encourage people to use bicycle as part of their daily commutation. Most importantly, huge subsidies are being provided to various bicycle producers in order to reduce the cost. Moreover, the smoke emitted from vehicles are causing air pollution to a great extent, hence, such initiatives could reduce level environmental pollution drastically. Additionally, the government wants people to be healthy, which would be achieved when bicycle becomes integral part of their life.
Various reports show that such initiatives of spending a lot of money to improve the bicycles have reduce traffic in cities such as Tokyo and Singapore. Moreover, the consumption of crude oil in various countries have been increasing steadily, which could be marginally reduce when some nations encourage their people to use bicycle. Similarly, some nations have improve the air quality level, due to increase bicycle usage. Therefore, I strongly assume, when people use bicycle would reduce traffic pileups, and help them to stay healthy.
In conclusion, in my view, the government spending a lot of money is really required for people to use bicycle as part of their life. Also, the country could benefit various ways life decreasing crude oil imports and enable people to be healthy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
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Message: Use past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
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Line 7, column 175, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ways'' or 'way's'?
Suggestion: ways'; way's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, really, similarly, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my view, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31666666667 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72832671553 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9414179285 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175678160703 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696330878798 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791423272618 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121946261073 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523733957304 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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